it is a different topic.... and I think the children will like it very much because they are so eager to learn how to make a cake.... yes.. I agree with tuğba and esra about the mistakes and missing parts... your speech was good you said the words one by one which is good... thanks a lot...
Apart from some mistakes such as "wait 30 minutes" it should be "wait for", "bake the cake for 30 minutes" I liked your video. Thanks
ReplyDeletesome parts of writing couldn't seen clearly. they were missing. but good job. thanks...
ReplyDeleteit is a different topic.... and I think the children will like it very much because they are so eager to learn how to make a cake.... yes.. I agree with tuğba and esra about the mistakes and missing parts... your speech was good you said the words one by one which is good... thanks a lot...
ReplyDeletea creative way to teach the instructions!your video is very well-organized and I liked your story :) thanks
ReplyDeleteA creative video and the way you teach is very nice :) Thank you, good job
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